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Watching as the illness took over you...
day by day.

Your hands quivering.

Your eyes no longer seeing what was there.


I tried to pray for you...but I could only blame him for taking you away.


I denied what I believed in...

No longer wanting to believe in something that couldn't give me hope.


Literally, as if I could feel the world falling from beneath my feet...
I collapsed to the ground in tears.

Inside myself I felt hallow & empty...
a part of me had died with you.



Even now I can't bring myself to get over the pain.

         Even now the memory of you no longer brings me happiness
©2007-2010 ~Siren-Cira
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Author's Comments

just something really personal to me (please don't ask)
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anyways, hope u like it :D

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:icondannyo789:
sometimes something that we try to bury in our soul will always come back to become a shadow of our taunting memories... felt the writting honest and pure it's great ! :D
:iconsiren-cira:
true :)
thx a lot :D

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~Belinda~
"Artists can see beyond the beauty that this world has to give, beyond the limits of their mind, beyond ourselves..."
:icondannyo789:
as always :D :hug: can't wait to see more :P
:iconfatallover:
quite sad

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"Hail to the Blue"
Le bleu Fleur





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:iconsiren-cira:
thx for the fav :)
^-^ :hug:

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~Belinda~
"Artists can see beyond the beauty that this world has to give, beyond the limits of their mind, beyond ourselves..."
:iconmrniklaus:
The power of the human soul is something that words cannot always describe in the detail needed. Ironically it does not need a lot of exacerbation because the way you told of your emotions and inner pain was just right. Balance is always important because you want people to understand the way you feel and share those feelings with them, nothing more.

Well done.

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"So, you want to see if the carpet matches the drapes huh? Well, only the luckiest of women get to find out." b^^
:iconsiren-cira:
true, ty for your words :) and thx for the fav ^-^

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~Belinda~
"Artists can see beyond the beauty that this world has to give, beyond the limits of their mind, beyond ourselves..."
:iconfatallover:
most welcome

--
"Hail to the Blue"
Le bleu Fleur





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