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I walk the streets painted by blood.
Where life has no meaning.
“Where is the change you promised?”  

I see mothers fall to tears as children are taken from them.

I watch as innocence is slaughtered by soulless beings.
Where the heart does not exist.
“What will keep this world going when the most precious gift is taken?”

I see fathers fighting to protect their own when no one else will.

I cry at the cruelty that is witnessed.
Where the world is tainted.
“When will it end?”

I see daughters scarred by the pain of others.

I hear children crying for it to stop.
Where the soul exists.
“Where have they gone?”

I see sons no longer responsive to the love they knew.

I feel the world in pain.
Where they return.
“Will it remain?”
©2007-2010 ~Siren-Cira
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inspired by the Nightwish song: Eva

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:icondannyo789:
Mother's give anything for their children,
Their warm chest, their infinite love,
Their life w/out a doubt
But have you ever wondered
that a child can give it's life too?

Stupid thought but I really like this writting... specaily the mother/child topic *sigh* touches a mooshy gooshy part of me, remarkable work :D
:iconsiren-cira:
Yea, I def. thought about a child giving its life knowingly what it'll do to help.

and thx for the lovely comment :hug: :D

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~Belinda~
"Artists can see beyond the beauty that this world has to give, beyond the limits of their mind, beyond ourselves..."
:iconwisdom4sorrow:
:heart: wow

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:blackrose:Call my name
As I look upon your life and realize I'm not to blame...:rose:
And for the disaster that is you I will bear no shame:blackrose:
:icondannyo789:
your welcom :d hope to see some more writting :p
:iconsiren-cira:
thx :D

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~Belinda~
"Artists can see beyond the beauty that this world has to give, beyond the limits of their mind, beyond ourselves..."
:iconfatallover:
good writing

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"Hail to the Blue"
Le bleu Fleur





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:iconsiren-cira:
thx :)

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~Belinda~
"Artists can see beyond the beauty that this world has to give, beyond the limits of their mind, beyond ourselves..."
:iconfatallover:
you're welcome

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"Hail to the Blue"
Le bleu Fleur





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:iconmrniklaus:
Kudos,

I wanted to write a similar poem just like this but you kind of took that away from me. The view is very flexible and that it comes form many different perspectives in such a realistic way is very enticing to me as a reader and poet. A great work.

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"So, you want to see if the carpet matches the drapes huh? Well, only the luckiest of women get to find out." b^^

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